Sassy Ever After: Check Mate (Kindle Worlds Novella)

Sassy Ever After: Check Mate (Kindle Worlds Novella) - Sheri  Lyn There are so many problems with this book that I could write a 500-page essay on it, but in a nut shell:
The writing style resembles that of an pre-teen !!!
Unbelievably immature characters!
Many of Rook's character treats and behavior patterns, if we presume that he is not suffering from any mental disorder, are from a psychological point of view impossible
Illogical with in the parameters of the story itself
The author constantly contradicts herself
Lack of artistic unity
massive plot holes
Editing problems